We agreed that splitting the screen horizontally would be an unwise decision for a mobile website given the limited real estate provided by the screen. I also originally presented the recipe as two separate processes that were combined at the end, but received the helpful feedback that this could be misconstrued as two separate recipes - I'll need to communicate more effectively that this is a single recipe consisting of two components. Other things to keep in mind based on feedback are margin consistency, neatness, not including too much information.